We talked about "active voice" in class. I did three of the scenarios given and they were:
1. The math problem was hard.
*Jim sighed as he placed his head in his hands. His pen laid upon the blank space instead of his answer.
2. Kim was angered by her boyfriend.
*Her nails dug into the palms of her hands when he mentioned his ex's boobs and how they filled out a halter top dress better than hers.
3. It was a nice spring day
*The tadpole awakened beneath the Sun's rays.
Also, we talked in class about how we should think of a small question that carries a lot of thought with it. I immediately thought about pain and how I once had a kidney stone. This is what I came up with:
Have you ever been in so much pain that your vision filled with a bright light even though you weren't dying?
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