Sunday, March 18, 2012

Peer Response #2 Week 9

For my peer response, I decided to do Kelsey's Calisthenic on 6 word short stories.


"Men's bathroom—worst hiding spot ever."

I wish I would have been there to hear about these 6 word stories! However, I wasn’t feeling well. From your Callisthenic and Taylor’s response, I can guess what they entail. I bet this type of story is hard to write because you have to think about something that is short and interesting enough to pick. That’s not including just breaking it down into 6 words when you probably want to expand SO BAD on this story. I think you do it nicely because it’s inventive and it leaves me wanting more. Why were they hiding? Why the men’s bathroom? Is this a girl who decided that it would be a good idea because no one would look for her in a space that is clearly off limits to her? What happened to make it the worst hiding spot ever? I WANT TO KNOW!! Lol.  Also, I think you should do a few more so we can see what else you come up with because this one is really interesting.

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